09 June 2003

Awright! from now on, all posts about Velara, Heidi, and Mem will be on P&KII.

As for writing . . . I wrote a bit on my tentatively-titled WIP last night. I think I'm forcing the story a bit, and it's giving me that itchy not-quite-right feeling I get when something's wrong. I may need to rewrite a bit--I think the MC (unnamed 1st pov) gives in a bit too easily, and that's just not him. He doesn't LIKE these "barbarian" Imotinans . . . especially since their women "don't know their place." I think I'm just shying out of the mindframe. Heh